Overall nice job Lillian. I think that the colors and drawings were good along with your tags. One thing that I would suggest to add to your blog is the poem that way we can sort of see where you may have got your tags from. I I think that you did a awesome job on painting and it really does in the end show.
Hey Lilly. Nice job on your butterfly, you could tell it took a lot of work to paint, repaint, draw the eyes, and write the words (in Polish), after the paint was dried. One thing I think you should add is your poem, and also capitalize Polish or Poles because it is a proper noun. Other than these two suggestions, I believe your interpretations and tags were well written and easy to understand, along with the embedded quotes. Great job:)
Hey Lillian, I really liked your butterfly. I really like the use of the dark colour (black) in the background and then the use of contrasting colors for the eyes and candle. I also really like your use of textual evidence within your links. The only thing I would recommend would be to add your poem into you blog so we could reference to it. Besides that you did a really sick job man.
Overall nice job Lillian. I think that the colors and drawings were good along with your tags. One thing that I would suggest to add to your blog is the poem that way we can sort of see where you may have got your tags from. I I think that you did a awesome job on painting and it really does in the end show.
ReplyDeleteHey Lilly. Nice job on your butterfly, you could tell it took a lot of work to paint, repaint, draw the eyes, and write the words (in Polish), after the paint was dried. One thing I think you should add is your poem, and also capitalize Polish or Poles because it is a proper noun. Other than these two suggestions, I believe your interpretations and tags were well written and easy to understand, along with the embedded quotes. Great job:)
ReplyDeleteHey Lillian, I really liked your butterfly. I really like the use of the dark colour (black) in the background and then the use of contrasting colors for the eyes and candle. I also really like your use of textual evidence within your links. The only thing I would recommend would be to add your poem into you blog so we could reference to it. Besides that you did a really sick job man.
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